Text for Editing Practice, Part I (Body Art essay

Paragraph A (body paragraph):

In my opinion, I am agreement on music therapy is a good method for health. For instance, I have heard that doctor often advices people to hear some gentler music to keep gently. That makes a good environment to help people to ease anxiety, and helps sick cure quick.

In my opinion, the music therapy is a good tool method for health. Also I had heard the doctor always advise the people listen some good music to keep themselves comfortable. That is really helpful for people life to get out from various anxiety and different diseases.

Paragraph B (conclusion paragraph):

In conclusion, we can get different messages from the music. For instance, when we feel the stress of getting too much work to deal with, we can use the music to relax ourselves. On the other hand, we can also use music to keep our bodies to stay healthy. To me, music is a magic tool to help us managing our mind.

Indeed, we can take distinct message from that music. When we feel streets and doing a lot of work he music get out from those stressing contrast, We can also prefer to listen music as music keep our body relaxation and music is a conjure magic tool to set up cool  any person mind.

Paragraph B (conclusion paragraph):

Music has many powerful ways to effects our body and mind. It relaxes our body and prevents the harmful effects of chronic stress. Now, we can think about music therapy and other benefits of it without wondering, and believe that music is a good tool for health.

To sum up, music is a very strong weapon to affect our body and mind. It relaxes our body and prevents the harmful effects from chronic strees.Now we can think about the music therapy and other benefits from it without woundring, and we can believe that music is a good tool for health.

BP #9 - Final Reflection on HeLa

When in was read that book I got a lot of information about cells. It was wonderful experience for me to read Henrietta lacks. From that story I learned many things such as her story was inspired me thrived. Henrietta lacks was role model for today in our lives. In fact she faced many terrible situations at that time when she got her cervix cancer treatment. I personally think her cells give more awrnesee and very help full for people lives. In 1940 and 1950 had racial with black and white but doctor took her cells without her family permission. It can be devastating for any person life. Today in this world, people live in new technology and they could awareness new style and sensational Environment. People have more technology awareness and raise many things. If doctor take my cell from my body which is really help full for people life and my tissue would covering many dieses. I would strongly agree to do that thing. Instead, they took some tissue from my body without my permission. It is true this is not legal and any doctor could not able to do that risk. But in some causes cases doctors want to do because they save the other people lives. If doctors give any consent for me and I family and was very happily agree to give my cells tisssue.

                                                                             

                                                     

I am very happy to give the tissue for any researcher lab because it can be wounded for me. I want to give my own body tissue for some lab researchers and scientist which is really help full for human being. Scientist should doing research for my tissue and It has really great pleasure for me to helping for  humanities In our society people still fight with different diseases some people could not able to pay for them high cost treatments. Those types of people really need help from others. This is really measure benefit for them if someone gives them help. Furthermore, if doctor doing research for my cells and which is really help for people it can be amazing experience for my life. I would not consider taking any charges from my body cells.

BP #8 - Going Green Again

I really want to change my life to going green such as, today in our materialistic society people still lives in busy lives nobody has time to going green and save their life by takes some natural benefits. In my life I strongly peruse to going green plants, people should make any green aceeses of sector to save their life. Nevertheless, people have less opportunity to get those obligations but I think if any person wants to make their mind for doing something specific. They would be able to make their awareness. I want to make my own small garden in front of my house and reduce the atmosphere reduction pollution.. Moreover, if I don’t have any small  green sector I personally consider to going green around my if people think positive and natural they should be able to getting green gardens benefits their own lives. People get benefits by going green and live in healthy life.

In united sates people have very busy lives instead, people want to going green and save their life. Many people have different kinds of jobs and living style awareness. American people have their own houses and they make small gardens their front of house. People have different types of choices some people want to going green their neighborhood but some people consider to going green make their front of house. and take many People are going green and take different kinds of benefits, such as, few among people are really  curious about their health and some people live in busy life those are think the going green they probably, wasting g time for them. However, many Americans people make a accessible schedule and doing everything by on time. On the other hand, in my country people going green and many people have their own houses and small gardens .Furthermore, they want to do everything whatever they want. In fact when they are growing green plants they will sale their natural things by another cities .In my country , everyone’s lives in perfect life and take a lot of  good benefit by going green. Many people have their own lands and majority people have good sources of opportunity for their selves. Eventually people have good ways to produce their own green sector.

 Some time I am really surprise for one thing why people have less benefits to make their own green plants ,when they go to any other country,. They have lack of opportunities to do anything than their own countries. Why they cannot do anything in another country. From that point I didn’t realize anything and make me confuse in my life.