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Paragraph A (body paragraph):

In my opinion, I am agreement on music therapy is a good method for health. For instance, I have heard that doctor often advices people to hear some gentler music to keep gently. That makes a good environment to help people to ease anxiety, and helps sick cure quick.

In my opinion, the music therapy is a good tool method for health. Also I had heard the doctor always advise the people listen some good music to keep themselves comfortable. That is really helpful for people life to get out from various anxiety and different diseases.

Paragraph B (conclusion paragraph):

In conclusion, we can get different messages from the music. For instance, when we feel the stress of getting too much work to deal with, we can use the music to relax ourselves. On the other hand, we can also use music to keep our bodies to stay healthy. To me, music is a magic tool to help us managing our mind.

Indeed, we can take distinct message from that music. When we feel streets and doing a lot of work he music get out from those stressing contrast, We can also prefer to listen music as music keep our body relaxation and music is a conjure magic tool to set up cool  any person mind.

Paragraph B (conclusion paragraph):

Music has many powerful ways to effects our body and mind. It relaxes our body and prevents the harmful effects of chronic stress. Now, we can think about music therapy and other benefits of it without wondering, and believe that music is a good tool for health.

To sum up, music is a very strong weapon to affect our body and mind. It relaxes our body and prevents the harmful effects from chronic strees.Now we can think about the music therapy and other benefits from it without woundring, and we can believe that music is a good tool for health.

BP #9 - Final Reflection on HeLa

When in was read that book I got a lot of information about cells. It was wonderful experience for me to read Henrietta lacks. From that story I learned many things such as her story was inspired me thrived. Henrietta lacks was role model for today in our lives. In fact she faced many terrible situations at that time when she got her cervix cancer treatment. I personally think her cells give more awrnesee and very help full for people lives. In 1940 and 1950 had racial with black and white but doctor took her cells without her family permission. It can be devastating for any person life. Today in this world, people live in new technology and they could awareness new style and sensational Environment. People have more technology awareness and raise many things. If doctor take my cell from my body which is really help full for people life and my tissue would covering many dieses. I would strongly agree to do that thing. Instead, they took some tissue from my body without my permission. It is true this is not legal and any doctor could not able to do that risk. But in some causes cases doctors want to do because they save the other people lives. If doctors give any consent for me and I family and was very happily agree to give my cells tisssue.

                                                                             

                                                     

I am very happy to give the tissue for any researcher lab because it can be wounded for me. I want to give my own body tissue for some lab researchers and scientist which is really help full for human being. Scientist should doing research for my tissue and It has really great pleasure for me to helping for  humanities In our society people still fight with different diseases some people could not able to pay for them high cost treatments. Those types of people really need help from others. This is really measure benefit for them if someone gives them help. Furthermore, if doctor doing research for my cells and which is really help for people it can be amazing experience for my life. I would not consider taking any charges from my body cells.

BP #8 - Going Green Again

I really want to change my life to going green such as, today in our materialistic society people still lives in busy lives nobody has time to going green and save their life by takes some natural benefits. In my life I strongly peruse to going green plants, people should make any green aceeses of sector to save their life. Nevertheless, people have less opportunity to get those obligations but I think if any person wants to make their mind for doing something specific. They would be able to make their awareness. I want to make my own small garden in front of my house and reduce the atmosphere reduction pollution.. Moreover, if I don’t have any small  green sector I personally consider to going green around my if people think positive and natural they should be able to getting green gardens benefits their own lives. People get benefits by going green and live in healthy life.

In united sates people have very busy lives instead, people want to going green and save their life. Many people have different kinds of jobs and living style awareness. American people have their own houses and they make small gardens their front of house. People have different types of choices some people want to going green their neighborhood but some people consider to going green make their front of house. and take many People are going green and take different kinds of benefits, such as, few among people are really  curious about their health and some people live in busy life those are think the going green they probably, wasting g time for them. However, many Americans people make a accessible schedule and doing everything by on time. On the other hand, in my country people going green and many people have their own houses and small gardens .Furthermore, they want to do everything whatever they want. In fact when they are growing green plants they will sale their natural things by another cities .In my country , everyone’s lives in perfect life and take a lot of  good benefit by going green. Many people have their own lands and majority people have good sources of opportunity for their selves. Eventually people have good ways to produce their own green sector.

 Some time I am really surprise for one thing why people have less benefits to make their own green plants ,when they go to any other country,. They have lack of opportunities to do anything than their own countries. Why they cannot do anything in another country. From that point I didn’t realize anything and make me confuse in my life.

"BP #7 - Financial Responsibility"

According to the article Financial Responsibility for All: A myth or Reality?" by Lubie Grujicic-Alatriste how the young child hood involve in serious case when people have equated information about credit card and debit cards. Furthermore, the united states a large huge young people community life effaced by lack of information about any credit and debit cards. Usually, the college students life more affected by those types of serious problems.Fortunatly, there are many credit cards companies in USA. People should get benefits from those credit companies, such as students want to get some amount of credit for their few accessories. However, those credit companies don’t give a lot of information about their interest and another whole detail. Nevertheless, in the future will create have terrible situations for themselves, such as students have been not able to pay their credit card highly cost bills. Besides, student must careful for before submitting any for financial credit paper. That should not create shall trouble in their futures.

 The credit card needs cash flow for every ones’ People also want to buy something gradually things. Fortunately people still lives in different kinds of financial statues, such as financially credit card accumulates use in different ways. In present time, United States is one of the best and famous countries where people get many opportunities for their selves. Every year people establish their new businesses and take credit card loans. I am strongly agreeing the financial responsibility for all a real and very close to reality, because money is very important sector in human lives. People must have been to make earnings and spending out in various things. In my life I heard about one PHD person story.  Six years ago, he took loan from bank to start his doctor degree. When he was start his degree his very thrilled because he got money from bank to finish his degree. He couldn’t do any job during that time just he was considerate his study until graduate. He was think when he got his PHD degree he had a best way to starting any fantastic job. However, his situation was e worst because when he finis his PHD degree he had been to return paid for several bank loans. In fact he was not unwilling to pay those loans.

I have one solution to solve that problem, in fact the USA people have bunch of facilities. Whatever they want to do. If that person start any job during his education! He would be paid some amount of money for ever single week. It may be possible until; his graduate he also paid a lot of money. Many people take a loan for different reasons some people want to buy house, car study, and businesses. They would be take that good advantage to make their life easier and they wants to give new potential chance their selves. When people take high task loan it not possible to return the bank. Many people property the bank corrupt and never give them back. This is really harmless for those people who buy those things. Some people things the United States give free money for people who are American citizens’. Also it is not true they give super benefits for any NY residence but not free money. People could take loan for their personal access but they should have to return their debit loan. It is a liable

for any debit their credit if they don’t pay their bill on time they would have to face any temptation for their selves.

 In my country people have small amount of credit limit   financial responsibility than USA. The legacy of people has to pay their own credit. Many bank gives limited opportunity for people and people have responsibility to handle and manage their things. Many people make their own budget and they never have any cosign credit card system. But the United States has many good resources for people to open the joint and separate account .Another thing; in my country many older people estimated some money for their children and some close relative. When they need overdrawn their money older people give them where they want to spend their credit. Usually, the government barred from, people having cash with their own. They can deposit their credit in bank but they have limited choice to take any better advantage for them. Although the financial responsibility always is true not myth at all. ‘’It is swim after that ‘’about credit cards. People should connect with benevolent types of extension financial responsibilties.

BP #6 - Mini Essay on HeLa and Informed Consent

From the Henrietta book it was really marvelous message for everyone lives. The consent is very important thing for any researcher doctor and lab during the 1940 and 1950 was very racism in people lives. At that time many African America had racism with each other. As a result many black people life affected by American. Instead the racism in every country such as a different waves. People life could affect by various kinds of racism. Hells which one of those her life had a great impact in our society. Therefore, the doctor took her cell without her family allow and they research and sending them many countries. The consent patient is really important contract between patience doctor and hospital. As patient and doctors have a strong approval for any treatments. There are very benefits for both of them. Nevertheless, if patient have any problem it can be accident doesn’t matter the doctors involves. The form and consent are good deal with hospital and patients.

in my country I never any cause doctor take anything without the patient permission. Also the doctors are more curious about patient consent signature paper. Usually, they want to do everything with their family and relevant cousins between take any decision. Moreover, in my country doctors don’t do anything wrong with their patients because after they know if they do any wrong treatment with patients, they will get highly cost penalty from government and it could be able to lose their jobs. In addition, in my country people have accesses to do any good research for anything. But also they are more sensitive to take any disadvantage for patients. Fortunately, the doctor gives full consideration to take any decision about the patient treatments. There are more ambitious to give the consent r to start any treat treatment. It is provide benefits for doctor and patients. In my country, the government recommends highly peruse to sign for and consent paper. There are very good significant between doctors patients and hospitals.

          

Today we have materialistic society, people live s in new environment. Everyone knows about the government rules and policies. Most important thing people are aware to take any super advantage for their selves. They are educated and able to read anything and sign any approval paper. If someone have a trouble for anyway they would be able to get help from others. Today people should do everything carefully. If they want to do anything they must take permission for patient’s family. They are know about the today people have many rights than palothic time. Moreover, doctors can do research for anything but they should have to know about the patients family, even they let know about their family whatever they are doing. It is good step for any patients and our entire community, when doctors want to get any research because they would introduce something new and which is help full for people lives. In this world the doctors role are very important and good signal for everyone. As the doctors save the person life and provide good things. Doctors do everything for the patients good, if they take any step with the government and family permission is good for the doctors and the patients. As a result, they are not to get any trouble for their selves.

I have a really great idea to reading Henrietta book, I never read any book before those topics, several times I got shocked in some ways when doctors took her cell without her permission and her family even does not know anything. I always confuse about that why those doctors didn’t tell her family what matter gone with her. Doctors took her cell and doing really amazing work with her cells because today the people save many dieses from Henrietta cells. In other

BP #5 - Mini Essay on one of the articles

Sustainable Restaurants

Restaurants are ultimately important for people lives because today in our busy live the majority of people have actuated time to make food for them. However, the restaurant food which is not healthy for people health. Unfortunately, the situation is change several restaurants    would not been using the organic vegetables and fruits items.  People are increase many devastating diseases by using the restaurant food. In addition if the government measures more to promote sustainable and support true legal and valid food. People might save their lives by using the green house organic food which is superlative reduction for pollution. Sustainable restaurant are limited for people because many of restaurants. They do not curious about to providing the people good food. The local government and community should take any good stander step that is help full for people life. Moreover, if the people make more sustainable restaurant they using greenhouse organic vegetables and products. They should be increase their business and provide superficial ben for people. Many people having a job and they do not have time to go to some where else to buy something fresh. Due to the fact, people couldn’t have time to cook the food at home, this is how the sustainable restaurant more important for people. Furthermore if government provides them sustainable restaurant foods, it is very fabulous step for people lives.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sustainable_agriculturehttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sustainable_agriculture

BP #4 - Going Green

1People always concern to use benevolent food system, enhance the majority of people use animals products, which is not more health for them. Usually, people getting fat and it is problem for their health. Indeed, the animal’s product using in our entire society people should use in different ways. Also people increases their huge of bussineses, yet people make many viable businesses from those waves.

2 I don’t have any idea about using the using the carbon foot, as people should saving money to start their new business and any green form. It would be sustainable impact on food nutrition system. I personally perused for people are bring they own shopping bags to reduce the carbon foot print.  Although some time is problem for people to bring their own bags.
3 I have access to store with organic food such as, there are many countries here they consist to use organic food. Fortunately people also curious about their health nutrients and they want to use organic food vegetable, fruits and getting a lot of vitamins by using the vegetable. Unless people use the organic food they saving their lives from different serious disease and people live long.

4 I think the agriculture green houses it is more helpful for our lives people should struggling to open the new agriculture system and food sustainability. They must organize the new green houses and farms to saving the community lives. In my live I haven’t use any green house farm but I would consider to use green house and organic food. It is a very superficial system for lower income people they saving money and getting a lot of benefits from opening a green house.

Please title your post: BP #3 - Mini Research: ( topic)1

Chemo therapy is a strong treatment for any cancer patient that makings any chemical to fight with cancer diseases. Some time it could dangerous for patient but in 1940 and 1950 researcher and doctors was reach with it and they think it is very help full for cancer patients. They thought many people save their life by chemotherapy treatment

''It’s important for everyone to know about the cancer treatment of heneritta. It was a really great impact and lesson in our society. How hell passed throw all the difficulties with enough financial source. She had a really nice treatment in hospital but there was little bit racism problem with her. In fact, the doctor didn’t provide her good facilities. Unfortunately, they were hiding from her several things. During that time the people have racism with black and white. Many white people never give the rights for black people. The doctors resolved that she didn’t need any radium treatment likewise white. Moreover her doctors thoughts she will need just xray treatments. Nevertheless, her cancer spread her whole body and she was feelings very worst. On that time, the white people have more benefits and government paid mush higher treatment than black people, such as the white people live little longer than black people. Therefore, in 1940 and 1950 the Rebecca took stand for hella story. As she thought her story was very wonderful for people. At the beginning, Henrietta family got excused from her question. But later, they agreed with Rebecca. She thought people should know about her dramatically story and getting lesson. She will in great example for every body’s future. Now a days, the people save their life by hella cells.

I really disappointed from Dr George gay wasn’t told her situation her family. He was informing her family and telling about his ressaresh what he wanted to do. From many years her story was hidden from people. I don’t know why that story hidden from many years, If people know about her story they should feel proud and wonder to read her story for their rest of life. Henrietta was a role model for everyone.
http://.ncdi.nih.gov/timeline/flash/milestones/M2_1949.htm

BP #3 - Mini Research on HeLa themes

How do you think HeLa's family feels? question # 2

I think the Hela family feels very bad because the doctors took her cells without her family permission. The doctors should get permission her family what they wanted to do. Now days, everyone uses hela cell to save any benevolent diseas.But her family really didn’t know what the doctors did. The doctor’s thoughts they are doing well when they took her cells it is true they did well because these days many people take benefit from her cells and live in happy life. If the doctors let them knew her family and give them any financial support. It could her family feel little better.

BP #2 - Taking advantage of someone

Around the world there are many people here who take any kind of advantage. Many years ago, I took advantage with my family by working on fabric embroidery work. When I was 14 year old my grandmother prefers to work with her. I really didn’t know how to do that work instead I was agreeing with her. One day she said I need to do some motels stone work. At the beginning I was bit scared because it’s really new for me to do these work. When I was working on bridal dresses.Neverthless, before few weeks my grandmother didn’t like my work but I was still practice to follow her. Every day I went to school and come back to help my grandmother. When I was working with her furthermore I was thinking about her. Why she gave me that boring work in fact I didn’t have any interest those types of things. However, I was working with her and after few months later my worked had been improved. She was appreciating my work and I had able to do all of work with her. She got new contract from her boss and I also helped with her. Several months before I really need a good job. I didn’t find any job than my friend gave me a suggestion to do that work because she knew I had to know that work. When I was starting to work on embroidery to make a bridal dresses. I earned good money from doing that work. When I was working on the fabric I am remind my grandmother how she give me really great experience. Although, I didn’t want to do those work with her but when I work I got the idea how to do the work. Moreover, it was fabulous experience for me and sometime people don’t like to do something else. But when they do it would increase their interpersonal skills. From that advantage in my life it’s very meaning full for me.

Introduction #1

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